Well done Jonathan. It is a really well structured blog. You have used all the knowledge in class and you use "首都" correctly. Next time, you could try to use both 首都 and 省会
One mistake I need to point out "澳洲的首都是悉尼" this is a general knowledge mistake. it should be Canberra :)
Also, You need to use parragraph in your future writing.
However, this is quite a good piece of work. I am looking forward to read more of your postings.
Well done Jonathan. It is a really well structured blog. You have used all the knowledge in class and you use "首都" correctly. Next time, you could try to use both 首都 and 省会
ReplyDeleteOne mistake I need to point out "澳洲的首都是悉尼" this is a general knowledge mistake. it should be Canberra :)
Also, You need to use parragraph in your future writing.
However, this is quite a good piece of work. I am looking forward to read more of your postings.
Enjoy your trip in Canada and the US