Sunday, July 5, 2009

The World


世界上有许多国家, 包括澳洲,新西兰,印度,俄国,台湾,北朝鲜,南韩,德国,法国,英国,中国,加拿大,美国和日本。

每个国家都有她们的首都; 好像澳洲的首都是堪培拉,新西兰的是惠灵顿,印度的是新德里, 俄国的是莫斯科,台湾的是台北,南韩的是汉城,北朝鲜的是平壤,德国的是柏林,英国的是伦敦,法国的是巴黎,日本的是东京,加拿大的是渥太华,美国的是华盛顿特区,当然还有我门中国的首都是北京。世界人口大约是六十亿。 我曾经去过以上许多国家。 在这个学校假期,我会去加拿大和美国旧金山旅行。

1 comment:

  1. Well done Jonathan. It is a really well structured blog. You have used all the knowledge in class and you use "首都" correctly. Next time, you could try to use both 首都 and 省会

    One mistake I need to point out "澳洲的首都是悉尼" this is a general knowledge mistake. it should be Canberra :)

    Also, You need to use parragraph in your future writing.

    However, this is quite a good piece of work. I am looking forward to read more of your postings.

    Enjoy your trip in Canada and the US

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